"Don't Sell. Solve Problems" -- Need feedback on our tagline
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MarketFit is launching soon.
I thought what would be a better forum than PH to get some feedback on our tagline.
We are evaluating 2 options but open to others too.
1) "Don't Sell. Solve Problems"
2) "Sales AI: Don't Sell. Solve Problems"
3) (think of something other tagline)
Much appreciate if you could give a feedback by mentioning 1,2,3 and maybe suggest a tagline if 3...we would be super grateful.
For quick reference: https://www.producthunt.com/products/marketfit
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Another round of thanks to everyone in helping us choose the right tag line.
🚀We are live on PH at this moment using the final tagline.🚀
Appreciate your support and comments please!
https://www.producthunt.com/products/marketfit
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Could you tell me a little more about your product? I don't have a good idea of what the product is from the tagline~.
@elly_sp Sure Elly. Please check here https://www.producthunt.com/products/marketfit or at our website ... marketfit.mgimpacts.com Thanks for reaching out.
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@manu_goel2 Just thought this might help people better understand what the product is.
Sales that solve—AI that helps you understand, not just pitch.
From pitch to purpose. AI leads the way.
AI for sales that listen and solve.
@elly_sp Thanks Elly for your thoughts. Much appreciate. We are adding these to our list of considerations. Thanks again.
I'd go with Option 2 since "Sales AI" immediately clarifies what type of tool this is.
A couple of suggestions on the current copy:
"Sales guys" could be more inclusive - consider "sales teams" or "sales professionals" instead.
The phrase "Does only what matters most to [sales professionals]" doesn't clearly communicate what the product actually does. I can see it's sales-related, but the specific problem it solves isn't obvious from the description.
@manu_goel2Glad it was helpful! You're partially right about the "guys" comment - it has become more casual. I just think it's always safer to use inclusive language in marketing copy since you never know who's reading and what their experiences are. Thanks for being so open to feedback!
@olga_s52 Hi Olga, I forgot to inform and thank you. We made all the changes as per your suggestion. Thanks a lot for your suggestion. Also, we launched our product in public 10 days back and are getting quite a good response till now. Few sales already made and 2 enterprise edition sales about to happen. We are scheduled to launch on PH on Sep 28. thanks again
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@manu_goel2 Smarter selling starts with solving.